276. BERT ‘Tawa’ MARCELO for HITACHI Space Wind Module ELECTRIC FAN, 1980

HITACHI SPACE WIND MODULE ELECTRIC FAN, Print Ad, 1980

In 1980, HITACHI-UNION, a joint venture with Hitachi ldt., of Japan,  introduced a new electric fan with advanced features perfect for the cosmic age—the HITACHI SPACE WIND MODULE ELECTRIC FAN.

The revolutionary fan has a Streamlined Body Base designed by the world’ s top engineers, and an easy Space Slide Switch to change fan speed. Its unique Aerodyne Control is a special attachment to the fan guard that is designed to concentrate air-flow and direct it as you please.

Who best to sell the new HITACHI SPACE WIND MODULE ELECTRIC FAN than a TV space alien—a MORK lookalike inspired by the 80s TV hit series, “MORK AND MINDY”, starring goofy Robin Williams. 

WATCH BERT MARCELO'S HITACHI FAN

 "MORK" TVC  30s HERE:

The Filipino comic counterpart was the equally zany Bert “Tawa” Marcelo, who hammed it up as a Pinoy Mork, who emerges from an egg  dressed in a similar alien costume , and selling the fan features using his famous Bulacan accent and spiced with his trademark laughter.

Na-noo, na-noo? “Aw, come on!”

SOURCES:

Bulacan Accent by Bert "Tawa" Marcelo in his Hitachi Commercial, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CSNB52_7aqA, uploaded by Bulakenyo KaKung, 23 Oct. 2018.

203. What’s Wrong With This Ad? HITACHI REF Print Ad, 1981

WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS AD? Poor grammar turned this HITACHI ad into a flop. 1981.

Writing for advertising involves writing for effect, so it is expected that rules of grammar are intentionally not observed—like starting a headline with a conjunction, splitting infinitive, and removing punctuations. But obviously, the copy for this HITACHI REFRIGERATOR  print ad was not done for that purpose. Clearly, it was just written poorly, and the result is a very awkward headline.

In an attempt to draw parallelisms between the beauty of a woman, a rose and a ref, the copywriter wrote: “Two beautiful things, A Rose and a Ref, things that make women have something in common.”

 

HITACHI  AD This ad had a billboard version in Greenhills, which had the same mistake,

Oops, say that again?

We sort of get the drift that the copywriter wanted to convey: that beauty is something that women have in common—which can be had by having a beautiful rose—and a beautiful refrigerator, in this case, HITACHI. The body copy is similarly mushy and wordy. Crafting this multi-message thought in a one sentence headline proved to be a challenge for the copywriter.

Apparently, someone took note of the headline’s wrong grammar that the ad was hastily pulled out and revised. The rewritten headline now read: “ Two beautiful things…A Rose and a Ref, things that women have in common”.

THE AD CORRECTED a few issues later. Note the shorter headline that has
been grammatically fixed.

 The addition of ellipsis (…)  to separate the thoughts, and the straightening of the wrong grammar in the next line were the quick fixes done by the copywriter (or perhaps,  her creative boss) on the headline.  The body copy has also been streamlined, and made more concise. Better, but, oh well..you be the judge.

THE CORRECTED HITACHI AD, clearer but is it better?

Here is a saying that goes: “A lawyer’s mistakes are in jail, a judge’s mistakes are in the cemetery, but a copywriter’s mistakes are shown on TV every night”. So copywriters, be warned.